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Open Poetry #37

What I Think

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

0 posted 2006-04-12 06:50 PM

Everytime I look at you
I always am amazed
At the way you truly make me feel
Seeing that smile upon your face

You glisten with a beauty
A warmth, a glow, like the sun
An entrancing sparkle from your eyes
Invades my dreams every night

I can't get away from this
No matter how hard I try
But the very smallest thought of you
Fills my hunger deep inside

No need to worry my dear
or to be distressed
I'm just trying to say to you
I really think your the best

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-04-12 09:34 PM

very sweet write

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2006-04-13 09:33 PM

Nice hungry words

Dave

fmlbarebackrider2001
Member

since 2005-11-16

Posts 138
West Texas, United States

3 posted 2006-04-13 11:38 PM

Ok, all at once say "Aw"! I like this one.

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

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