Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
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2006-04-11
02:13 PM
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Rewrite:
Listen to the Breeze
I launched some words upon the breeze Among the flowers, through the trees They danced a dance and echoed flack The last three words of love me back
I sent them on the wind to plea Because they would not silent be They fired on my brain and tongue And burned my mouth like pepper stung
Although I am not infantile My wit has gone to juvenile I hang naïve and don’t believe The love I have I can achieve
It is a love of dreamers real Beyond the real of age appeal It is a love of residue Only given to very few
The all of what the echo packed Was could you, would you love me back
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Seymour Tabin
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Martie
Moderator
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
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2006-04-11
03:25 PM
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Sy
A lovely request....
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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
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2006-04-11
04:03 PM
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Sy!? You know I would! Lovely lovely write!~ Trace my body with your words, in doing so, you touch my heart ~
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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
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2006-04-11
04:20 PM
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Oh, Yes - I sung this down the page! Well done!
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scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
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2006-04-11
04:22 PM
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As Bob Dylan once said..."The answer my friend is blowin' on the Wind..."believe in what your heart feels...
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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posted
2006-04-12
10:09 AM
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watch out for your answer Sy, it may cause storm surge
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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posted
2006-04-12
10:13 AM
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Goood morning, Mr. T. ~
You launched some pretty, loving words on the breeze this fine spring day!
~ and may they be echoed back to you!
EA
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