Open Poetry #37 |
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One Final I Love You |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA ![]() |
The hardest thing I've ever done, Was say good-bye to you. It broke my heart to write the words, "My dear, I fear we're through". You're all I ever wanted, All I dreamed I'd never find. And although our paths have parted, You'll be always on my mind. Your love was so unselfish, So open, unreserved... And parting was so painful, And wholly undeserved. If I live to be a hundred, I will love you with each breath. And maybe I'll find solace, When my eyes have closed in death. I hope you soon forget me, And find someone who's true... But may I close my letter, With one final, "I love you." |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
i love this and i bet she loves you too smiles, curiouse i'm looking for you...always... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi cowboy... forget you?! Never! ![]() So good to see you writing and posting more often. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A wonderfully thoughtful write John. You're a romantic on a saddle for sure. believe in what your heart feels... |
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fmlbarebackrider2001 Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 138West Texas, United States |
Cowboy, you've done it again. Nice work hun. Know yourself before you try to know someone else. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
And he rides off into the sunset... Sigh Very romantic and sadly heartfelt. ~ Klassy |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Oh John! This is so beautiful and so sad. Are you sure it's over? Sounds like you both love each other. Sigh... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
We'll all say this and even if it was reversed as happens We'd still say the same words Dave |
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