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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2006-04-11 05:02 AM




Sugar Magnolia

pleasured old before your time

wearing Mexico


magic in the eights

naked in the morning sun

options kept open


mama’s bitterness

left no room to choose a life

beyond furniture


©2006 by icebox

[This message has been edited by icebox (04-11-2006 09:36 AM).]

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Martie
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1 posted 2006-04-11 11:06 AM


icebox

I feel a portrait in these...sad and only touched with color in a couple of places.  

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
2 posted 2006-04-11 04:11 PM


Well, you see here, Mr.icebox, I am so liking it when you tell the whole story because me brains work better that way but go on then, make me work why don't ya.  Sorry about that - just deviating from sanity but not so much as to not appreciate the depths of this write.
Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2006-04-11 04:19 PM


Please wear appropriate garments

Dave

The Lady
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-04-12 01:40 AM



I am always intrigued and amazed by your work icebox and this poem is no exception. Excellent.

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2006-04-12 07:40 AM


damn
Toerag
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Ala bam a
6 posted 2006-04-12 07:56 AM


Yanno ice?....I did photography, professionally for alot of years...and, been around alot of models...and, most are pretty stuck up doper "I'm the most beautiful creature on earth" type people...and...thought, by this title...that's what this was going to be about...LOL
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