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Open Poetry #37

Hell Is Frozen Over

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2006-04-10 03:51 PM

Well, you're up here sweating in your boots
while the Devils in his union suit.
Hell must be frozen over...
For you to be here at my door.
You said that's how it would have to be
For you to ever come back to me.
Yeah, you look Hot
but can't you see
I don't burn for you no more.

Well you and the Devil
don't stand a chance in Hell.
Once, you almost had my soul,
but I learned my lesson well.
Yeah, y'all are cool but I aint no fool
I'm not making that mistake twice.
He aint got a leg to stand on...
Hooves aint worth a damn on ice.

That old flame is no longer lit
So stay on your side of the pit.
If it seems I'm being cold...
Well I guess the tables turned.
There's a big black hole 'tween you and me
With no way to cross that I can see.
Whatever chance there used to be...
That bridge has long been burned.

Hell is frozen over
and the Devils turning blue.
It's the first time that I've seen you
Since you said that we were through.
You said it would have to be that way...
But I never thought I'd see the day...
Hell is frozen over...
But I'm finally over you.

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

1 posted 2006-04-10 04:10 PM

Uriah...Sounds like the making of a good song to me. Enjoyed...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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2 posted 2006-04-10 09:17 PM

I agree with Paul here

Musicmaker1969

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since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

3 posted 2006-04-10 11:05 PM

Woo hoo, preach it!!! I love poems like this, that are songs of the heart. I can hear this one in a fast beat country song. Good for you for standing your ground, because your right, the devil can't stand on ice because he is used to very hot locations lol. Great write. Always love reading yours.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

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