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It is only the pure left to be corrupted!
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It is only the pure left to be corrupted! |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
Listen to the breathless wind, Howling and whistling through the pit stops of life. Open your eyes to the war being waged all around. Forces of good and evil have made their final stand. The daylight shines less and less whilst the darkness glows in the neon night. Too many are those seduced by this heartless beating of the night. Evil spirits are plundering the weak and ego massaging the bad. The relentless juggernaut of self infliction grips like the cold. Only the warm hearted can survive this merciless onslaught. My heart is crumbling through this justified paranoia. Who of you can stand tall to this disease? Woe to you who wallow on the brink of sanity. It is only the pure that are left to be corrupted! |
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Androgynous Member
since 2006-04-08
Posts 71 |
"the darkness glows in the neon night." Nice one! Simply loved that line, much enjoyed the read  Love "How happy is the blameless vestal's lot! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
an interesting write and yes, I too enjoyed that neon line |
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EyeLashes New Member
since 2006-04-11
Posts 3 |
"Evil spirits are plundering the weak" great line! I'm new to the world of poetry, so I wish I could critique you, but the imagery I get from your poem is great. Hopefully someone as good as you could give me some pointers! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Woe to you who wallow on the brink of sanity. It is only the pure that are left to be corrupted!" Wonderful lines in this poem MERCURY. I greatly enjoyed it. |
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