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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-04-10 08:04 AM




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Never to Die

10 April 2006


Maybe words never speak
perhaps they are not needed
Two minds across a globe
brought together in thought

A melting of souls
captured, not as much in a net
Two hearts beating, each breath
heaven in hazel surrounding to view

An amber glow of childhood
her Canaan, in promise
Who needs words, or voice
souls reaching closer to hear

This amour, this love
an adoration, never to die
Please understand, He was there
the comforter, of those tears you cry

“for Trish - truly connected in time and space”


“Greater love hath no man than this,
that a man lay down his life for his friends,”
John 15: 13 KJV
a poet who cares


© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
Musicmaker1969
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1 posted 2006-04-10 11:17 PM


It is nice to know the Comforter is there, but sometimes one does not feel Him.  You feel empty and all alone and like God is a million miles away.  Yet, deep in our hearts, we know He is right there, we just have to wonder why He is so silent.  Nice poem reminding us that God is always near even when He feels far away.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

poettothecars
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2 posted 2006-04-11 11:32 PM


There she was in Ontario, Canada (Canaan) and I was in New Zealand

It was her morning, but more my own 3 am
but deep down, God knew we were together in soul

He knew she needed comfort, and within minutes of composting those words of mine above, she was herself reading them

right time, right place and everything
over two souls connected oceans apart in spirit of kind

a poet who cares

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