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Jack Straw
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since 2006-03-02
Posts 70


0 posted 2006-04-09 11:43 PM


Kinda funny the way things work
Everyday gettin dressed plain white shirt
You can't enjoy the simple things
We're not allowed to spread our wings

While few live life like the Kings
We live life fearing
The Kings,
The Kings who,
it seems
control the globe and everything.
I scream.

away I'm going my destiny
it seems.
the man has killed the rest of me
for schemes.
killed my thoughts, stomped my dreams
for greed

"Atrocities!"
they decree
sadly everyone agrees,
agrees to leave
and pay the fees
cut down the weeds
and burn the trees

feed the greed,
feed the greed,
Democracy turned Oligarchy
with ease.
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revised 4/10/06

[This message has been edited by Jack Straw (04-10-2006 11:21 PM).]

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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2006-04-11 04:24 PM


Using someone means you think your words lack something

Go by your words

Words have value in some quarters

Dave Page

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2006-04-12 10:07 AM


the rich get richer and the poor get poorer
ain't we lovely?

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
3 posted 2006-04-12 08:58 PM


Doesn't quite seem right;
I liked the way you expressed this.

miscellanea

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