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Open Poetry #37

One More Day

ghettogurl13
Junior Member

since 2006-02-13

Posts 11

0 posted 2006-04-09 01:29 PM

As you hide beneath the shadows,
dragged further down the path,
I strain to hear your whispers,
remembering your laugh,
As truth lay woe upon us,
and our hearts run with despair,
weak with desperation,
the pain i could not bare,
Struck constantly with flashbacks,
the voices still not near,
cravings drawn upon me,
bringing loss along with fear,
I look back on the memories,
the ones that we had lost,
thinking back on those days,
and all the tears they had caused.

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

1 posted 2006-04-09 07:23 PM

great expression, sometimes we need to get it out

a poet who cares

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