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Cold Pending. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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The ice cold grip of winter, still rests on our shoulders, cold wind blows the dancing daffodils, brave enough to peep out early. False alarms of warm sun, bring new flurries of birds. It is too early, the trees bare, under skies still tinged with winter at silver-blue edges. Lingering, stealing to blast a chilling reminder that the elements are feral. Birds call more of hope, that tommorow will be the start of a new life, a new begining of life treasured. http://wordsthoughtsfeelings.blogspot.com/ [This message has been edited by Goldenrose (04-07-2006 03:24 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well GR, I'm shaking that grip off, my friend It's time for her to leave now...she'll have plenty of time to hold us again next year |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
She is dragging her feet here and digging in...thank you for your reply.. Goldenrose. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
where is the link to your blog? I absolutely did love those pictures you took! If you don't have the blog any longer, please do keep taking photographs and send them to me in my email, if you will |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Here I sit in my basement home office shivering me timbers off. I even have a housecoat on over my clothes! ~ and I'm still cold! And now I go and read a vividly descriptive poem on winter's tenacious grip! Lordy! Lordy! Is there no mercy for this frigid "angel"?!? (Well, I'm not actually "frigid" ~ I'm just freezing!)  Loved your poem! But considering my present condition, it was perhaps a bit toooo vividly descriptive. lol May spring soon wrap its warm arms around you! Linda  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
The birds are calling hope around here and it is such a pleasant song. This was really lovely writing! *smile*....jo |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Linda sorry to remind you of how cold winter still is...if it was warm i would say it was warm, but the chill just has not ceased yet..the birds are gathered waiting for warmer days to begin their nesting...just a waiting game yet..thank you for your reply..please do try to keep warm..after what you have been through you dont want cold and flu as well.. Goldenrose. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Jo.. the birds are calling here..but only half heartedly...they wait...for days of amber warmness...thank you for your kind comments... Goldenrose. |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Nice write about nature...very warming! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thank you for your reply sweetberry.. Goldenrose |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Lingering, stealing to blast a chilling reminder that the elements are feral." Excellent work Goldenrose. Your descriptions are so real, full of motion. I am happy to say I believe spring has really decided to stay with us at last and it's a beautiful spring. Wait till you see it. |
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Androgynous Member
since 2006-04-08
Posts 71 |
"the dancing daffodils, brave enough to peep out early." Loved those lines especially, and the rest wasn't too bad eighter, enjoyed  Love "How happy is the blameless vestal's lot! |
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