Open Poetry #37 |
Forever, Me and You |
Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
The circumstances around us Will always be a little tough But know my arms are around you And that I love you so very much Some days will be a little harder The sky’s will appear grey Those times that we are kept apart From the storms that pass our way Like an anchor in the ocean You will always find me there Riding out the storms with you Reminding you how much I care So hold onto me when things get rough I will help to guide you through For together our hearts belong as one Forever Me and You FH 2005 Expressions, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful, and so like the way my Honey-bear and I feel about each other. Hugs, Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Mmmmmmm, I really like this one. Saving it to the library. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
oh wow! this is so gorgeous, very heartfelt write..thanks for sharing. ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
So sweet and loving wonderful writing enjoyed very much Julie |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Nice write. And yes, I am feeling the same way right about now with someone too, and sometimes it gets a bit rough, but that caring you capture so well and simply, is what keeps it together. Kristabell |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China |
I can sense the brush strokes as if it were a painting. Excellent Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nicely written. Dang, it's been eons since I saw your name in here. It's good to read you again Fee! |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
Wow... Thank you all so much for your comments. Those of you who remember me, just know I did not forget you, you carried me through some times. I never really left but am back and blown away by the talent that has since joined. Warmest of hugs to all. Fee Expressions, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Fiona! What a heart. So giving and more. I really like this one a lot. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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