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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2006-02-15 06:34 AM

one's love can mountains move
   time over time, ever felt
   in love anything will do
   to find happiness, it must be true

a friend of Hope is being hopeful
   for if mountains crumble
   do they still move?

love move's mountains and
   hopelessly, they crumble
   upon touch ... is such still love?

if hearts can be unsure
   what then love be ...
   can mountains still move,
   crumble,
   fall ...
   what does love see?

one's love, climbing such mountains
   learns, yearns through the climb
   that love moves itself
   making in its own time

© Copyright 2006 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2006-02-15 07:34 AM

~Very True

Love is a mountain~

~ARH

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-02-15 08:48 AM

A wonderful write Craig...very much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2006-02-15 08:51 AM

a friend of Hope is being hopeful
for if mountains crumble
do they still move?

this was so colorful and bright...enjoyed

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2006-02-16 12:01 PM

I liked the ending most of all!

Nice write, Craig~

Larry C

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Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2006-02-16 08:13 PM

Craig!
How cool is that? And I'm with Bluesy. Cool.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

exhale
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since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

6 posted 2006-02-16 09:27 PM

This was a wonderful, wonderful, write.
I really enjoyed it

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2006-02-16 09:35 PM

very thought provoking piece CT...good to
see ya again.

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