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Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-04-07 05:07 PM

A moment of image in the door

Scent to everymore

Legs as if tied to chairs in words absorbed

On sticks of legs as plaintains

words can not reach

In plastic

in mind in a sense of falling

As if

All your desires were tied

To the image

By the door

That was you

And a

Scent

That is still allure

Dave Page

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2006-04-07 05:40 PM

That makes perfect "scents" to me!

Linda

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2006-04-07 06:20 PM

"All your desires were tied

To the image

By the door

That was you

And a

Scent

That is still allure"

Great line Dave.
I enjoy reading your postings.
Nice write!!

JL

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2006-04-07 07:42 PM

A moment captured! Bravo!

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

4 posted 2006-04-12 07:37 AM

Wonderful and beautiful.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

5 posted 2006-04-12 04:35 PM

And old romantic

But not that old

I can just make the cup of tea

dave

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2006-04-13 11:56 AM

Wonderful image portrayed

Hope

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2006-04-13 01:59 PM

Dave~
And if your 'tea leaves' gift you with such lovely thoughts ... have another cup !!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

8 posted 2006-04-13 02:17 PM

Thanks everyone

Problem is I wrote it as if I couldn't move and couldn't get to a to woman who excited me due to the plastic on the legs leaving me to just live/leave with that essence of scent.

It came out different from what i writing - too many restricted in what they can achieve and in my usual I drapped it in romance and feelings

The words are there, the measurement is there,

The scent is there

Dave

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