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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2006-04-07 04:58 PM


As days are longer
The year gets to be brighter
And the Gloom deepens.

Gloom


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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-04-08 08:15 AM


As days are longer
The year gets to be brighter
And the Gloom deepens.


As the sunshine warms
Spirits lift the deadened thoughts
To new beginnings

Larry C
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2 posted 2006-04-08 02:44 PM


Okay Prof,
I'm sure there is some logic to this numbering system. I just can't figure it out. Are you passing on incrypted messages? Oh and don't think I'm falling for that Gloomy philosophy. I hear you're a fun guy.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-04-08 04:19 PM


I'm with Larry here
Professor Gloom
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4 posted 2006-04-08 06:44 PM


Thank you, nakdthoughts
For the response in kind.

Thank you LarryC
For taking the time to respond
As for the numbering system
OS stands for On(Off) Streets, then the number in the series
The next tells what type of poem it is
Say Haiku 1 or 3 where three Haikus are strung together
Other styles like Quad and random can thus be extrapolated.
I hope this helps in your understanding of the numbering system

As for the other
I’m sure you’ve been misinformed

Thanks Passing shadows

Gloom

Larry C
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5 posted 2006-04-08 10:02 PM


Ya' know I like that you are still willing to instruct even though you won't get paid. Gotta like a Prof like that. And, for the record, I have a pretty reliable source.
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