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Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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0 posted 2006-04-07 01:21 PM


I’m trusting you to know how deep is the sea
how wide is the river and how high is the sky
because only I can know how deep the misery,
how wide the agony and how high the suffering
on my winding road from shock to acceptance.

I trusting you to count the stars in the sky
and multiply tenfold as a measure of my tears
and the wind, catch the wind, the breezes and the gales
to know how many sighs fill up my darkened nights
but first and initially begin at the beginning
to unravel all the threads of remembered love  
and set them alight in the grate of memory.

Leave me, leave me, leave me clean and clear
to shutter my windows facing into soul
and twist the earth this way from the that of long ago
to here forever ground a mind’s wayward flight …
when you’ve finished counting all the many times
I’ve yet to say, “I love you” before I simply die.

How long is the road from shock to acceptance?

Helen / 7 April 2006

© Copyright 2006 Helen - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2006-04-07 01:57 PM


Helen, this one got me thinking for sure

I loved how you ended it

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2006-04-07 06:34 PM


"How long is the road from shock to acceptance?"

I'm afraid it's a never-ending story in this lifetime.  Truth never fades or dies.
What was, is, what is, is, and what will be will be.  
That leaves to beg the question: “Are the insane the only sane ones in the house?”

JL



Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
3 posted 2006-04-08 01:08 AM


Dixie - thank you so much for reading ... and for thinking!

JL - Yes, some things we know but are inclined to forget.  I perhaps would go with a "yes" to your question because I think the "insane" have been incorrectly labelled.  They perhaps are the wise who just cannot cope with the lie of this life.  

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