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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-04-07 07:22 AM


I read the newspaper of your willing
how you open the pages
of your breast's skin
and turn to the light side
of my boy shoe curious

you dress up in puddle suit pants
too big for your ankles to show
and you giggle like nasty candy
in a sticky box of sun
when I trip on purpose

for a face down splashing
in the unravel of your permission
I guess we are just two hoses
stuck in wells of want to
the syphon is automatic

and maybe we just do it
for the absent minded feeling
of being wrapped together
like crossed fingers
on a lucky guess bet

without the hint of any gloves on

_____________

daark

scribblenote: considering the intimacy of placing an order to go at anytown's drive thru...the deep well founded relationships that are ignited and fueled nearly eternal in those brief moments of emotional communication..?



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-04-07 07:42 AM


and maybe we just do it
for the absent minded feeling
of being wrapped together
like crossed fingers
on a lucky guess bet

without the hint of any gloves on


this gave me a sort of permissive meloncoly
feeling of sorts, but then, knowing you, figured you think kinda like me...as if to say, "oh well"?  Not much one can do but allow...and maybe hope a little bit, right?  We'll take every day as it comes...

smiles and hugs to ya this morning for a mouth watering fill of visuals...

outstanding!!!!!  

Happy Weekend D.

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-04-07 07:52 AM


ms lee j..
like we were in the same limo
at the drive thru huh...wink
thanks lady friend, be blessed
with the weekend

LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-04-07 08:11 AM


absolutely, and could very easily see that...me asking you for advice, and you coming up with the most reasonable and wise answers...even if you shrugged your shoulders...yanno?  


Earth Angel
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4 posted 2006-04-07 11:42 AM


Like ships passing in the night ~ sensing each other in a fleeting, yet unforgetable, moment in time.

Next time I'm at a drive-through, I will not just give a cursory look at the guy at the window. I will look deeply in to his eyes allowing our souls to connect... Oh, to think what I have been missing.

Seriously speaking, Dark One, I do so enjoy your vignettes!

Smiling here,
EA
Flowers

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2006-04-07 11:44 AM


ms ea...and I yours ms..you bless me with your mind.

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2006-04-07 01:15 PM


Thank you, Dark One! You bless this reader with yours as well.
Klassy Lassy
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7 posted 2006-04-07 10:40 PM


There is nothing drive through about this poem, Daark. I kept looking at that title.  Question marks every where.  I'm thinking no ankles, only because hip boots weren't enough to keep you from sweeping me out to sea.  But I'm hooked!  So reel me back in, will ya pleeze?

OK, I hear you laughing....  

hugs, Klassy

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8 posted 2006-04-08 12:44 PM


interesting

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Martie
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9 posted 2006-04-08 01:29 AM


DS.....There is something so playful in this poem.  Enjoyed!  
BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2006-04-08 02:45 AM


The roe from other species, eg salmon, is used to make mock caviar

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I guess we are just two hoses
stuck in wells of want to
the syphon is automatic
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Guess so, now that you mention it....
Very cool imagery, Dark Stranger~

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