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drive thru caviare |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I read the newspaper of your willing how you open the pages of your breast's skin and turn to the light side of my boy shoe curious you dress up in puddle suit pants too big for your ankles to show and you giggle like nasty candy in a sticky box of sun when I trip on purpose for a face down splashing in the unravel of your permission I guess we are just two hoses stuck in wells of want to the syphon is automatic and maybe we just do it for the absent minded feeling of being wrapped together like crossed fingers on a lucky guess bet without the hint of any gloves on _____________ daark scribblenote: considering the intimacy of placing an order to go at anytown's drive thru...the deep well founded relationships that are ignited and fueled nearly eternal in those brief moments of emotional communication..? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and maybe we just do it for the absent minded feeling of being wrapped together like crossed fingers on a lucky guess bet without the hint of any gloves on this gave me a sort of permissive meloncoly feeling of sorts, but then, knowing you, figured you think kinda like me...as if to say, "oh well"? Not much one can do but allow...and maybe hope a little bit, right? We'll take every day as it comes... smiles and hugs to ya this morning for a mouth watering fill of visuals... outstanding!!!!! Happy Weekend D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lee j.. like we were in the same limo at the drive thru huh...wink thanks lady friend, be blessed with the weekend |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
absolutely, and could very easily see that...me asking you for advice, and you coming up with the most reasonable and wise answers...even if you shrugged your shoulders...yanno?  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Like ships passing in the night ~ sensing each other in a fleeting, yet unforgetable, moment in time. Next time I'm at a drive-through, I will not just give a cursory look at the guy at the window. I will look deeply in to his eyes allowing our souls to connect... Oh, to think what I have been missing. Seriously speaking, Dark One, I do so enjoy your vignettes! Smiling here, EA  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ea...and I yours ms..you bless me with your mind. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you, Dark One! You bless this reader with yours as well.  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
There is nothing drive through about this poem, Daark. I kept looking at that title. Question marks every where. I'm thinking no ankles, only because hip boots weren't enough to keep you from sweeping me out to sea. But I'm hooked! So reel me back in, will ya pleeze?  OK, I hear you laughing.... hugs, Klassy |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
interesting My spirit will rise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS.....There is something so playful in this poem. Enjoyed!  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The roe from other species, eg salmon, is used to make mock caviar ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I guess we are just two hoses stuck in wells of want to the syphon is automatic ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Guess so, now that you mention it.... Very cool imagery, Dark Stranger~ |
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