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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-04-06 10:13 PM



The Way We Do

When the ache of your absence
Has held me underfoot of heavy hours
Thrash as I might against the weight
And logic confirms itself upon me
Branding a cross against my mind

That I wrestle loneliness as chains
It is then I realize that this
This feeling of longing is not just and only
But a message sent to me upon the wind
Flowing hand over hand in its reach
Stirring my spirit to rise and listen

Calling out, in silent echo, calling

Filling up the void in warmth
Spilling fears unfounded forth
Leaving worth fixated in my eyes
Shyly asking least in all surprise
Molding thoughts in feelings
Making sense in senses

And I lift the words to write
In the language that we speak
Sending back to you my heart
In all its conjugated tenses
And I see so optimistically

That quietly you have swept my pillow
Exposed my strength still beating
Moved your fingers on my skin to stir
That this is what is said upon your lips
And nursed as ivory petals to be spring
Taking all the rented pain a sigh away
The way we do, without a word to say

Copyright Kkh 4/6/06

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
1 posted 2006-04-06 10:18 PM


passing cards, popcorn,  one retired priest,
a dozen hugs and a huge grin for ya!  
Certainly deserved...soon, yes soon....the
dawn shall bring light to shimmering eyes
and words of wisdom to soft lips...

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2006-04-07 07:47 PM


"The way we do, without a word to say"

Nice.  Very nice.

JL



WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218

3 posted 2006-04-07 11:22 PM


This was exceptionally good; the imagery was beautiful. WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2006-04-08 12:36 PM


Not only is this a very beautiful poem, it is about a very special relationship, which you obviously appreciate very deeply.  May you both cherish and nourish it forever.

- Owl

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
5 posted 2006-04-08 01:35 AM


Wonderful write and this -
"The way we do, without a word to say"
requires a special connection that is rare these days.  Enjoyed your words!


BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
6 posted 2006-04-08 02:12 AM


That quietly you have swept my pillow
Exposed my strength still beating
Moved your fingers on my skin to stir
That this is what is said upon your lips
And nursed as ivory petals to be spring
Taking all the rented pain a sigh away
The way we do, without a word to say

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Such a beautiful sigh you leave for me to keep, Kathleen.

Lovely writing dear poetess~

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