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Never Really Gone
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Never Really Gone |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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Never Really Gone You never had to travel blind, all you really had to do was turn around to find I was right behind you all the while I travel too. You never really lost me and I didn't lose my way, just stopped awhile for coffee, I caught up later in the day before dusk went away. Sometimes I forget who you are for remembering who you were please forgive and understand when I get that mental blur, yes, change must occur. And though sometimes you feel alone, question anger at the dawn, you may look back on your way home, see nothing, and carry on... just know I am never really gone.  ~ |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
This is nice, Bubbles |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Sometimes I forget who you are for remembering who you were" So very well said, Dixie. I don't think I've changed that much in my ideas and attitudes but I surely can see the changes in others. Got me thinking now that maybe I have - would hope for the better though. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
very good. enjoyed. You Are Loved |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
yes, this is fantastic. absoloutly fantastic, curiouse |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
It seems that we are agreed then..that this is a fantastic poem..and it is..thank you for it.. Goldenrose. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 thank you |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Not only is this a fine penning, Dear Dixie, ~ it is a fine expression of your loving and blossoming spirit!  Hugs with love, Linda  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So sweet.....this is so sadly sweet. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a bittersweet write Dixie gal. And the picture? Perfect! Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you ladies |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Almost missed this one...Glad I didn't! Another fine piece of work. Thanx |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Sometimes I forget who you are for remembering who you were" So easy to hold on to an image. ! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
The words and picture combine to create a powerful poem!! Beautifully written. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Androgynous Member
since 2006-04-08
Posts 71 |
"And though sometimes you feel alone, question anger at the dawn, you may look back on your way home, see nothing, and carry on..." This got a Springsteen feel to it, so does the picture in the end, I love Springsteen, and so I loved this Love "How happy is the blameless vestal's lot! |
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