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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-03-30 08:11 AM

my memory was a popular tree autumn
tucking leaves in the g-string wind
when she was playing siren music
too far from any ocean
to be the girl next door

but then again my leather was new
and I didn't care about morrows
or morals as they were both boring
for the strummer of oars on seas
and they were only for the gods

of the old dogs entertaining
their earth birthing forgiveness
and older men in their cocoons
dressed as raisins with the bitter
of blue eye glue dimmerest

day dream nowadays of winterish oakay
still tree shaped but with their hindering
rooted in handshake accordions
of greasy contemplation, contented
but still, wishing the ocean was there

bare legged in her reversible nudity

______________

daark

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2006-03-30 09:49 AM

I enjoy your halcyonic writings that flirt with hedonistic implications. You walk, or should I say, "write", the line very well!

You are in a class of your own with this genre of creative ~ and sensuous ~ expression!

Talent oozes out of your every suntan-oiled pore!

EA

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2006-03-30 10:00 AM

ms 7 heaven you do call up
my smile boxes
with untied laces

thanks so much

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2006-03-30 12:51 PM

Linda put that so well...

You are truly so talented m'friend, and there is always that intriguing edge, rather like a promising bulge that teases with hope of . . .a satisfying treasure hunt.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2006-03-30 12:54 PM

ms serene..now I am nearly oozing the edge of a full grown smile, thanks so much lady friend

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

5 posted 2006-03-30 01:16 PM

Popular tree autumns, they do find leaves swirling and dancing like coins on a belly dancer's girdle ... there is something to be said for autumn's playful breezes, even though spring is said to be the essences of a young man's fancy.

For now, I'll leave dogs and gods and oceans to their own forgiveness. Soft warm winds ... the lume libero of summer and bare legs....

[This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (03-30-2006 10:49 PM).]

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2006-03-31 08:01 AM

ms kl..I so enjoy when you edit your comments..(grin) you smile me lady friend

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2006-04-08 11:21 PM

u do know how to work your audience
and could probably make even a hangnail spellbinding with your words of art

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2006-04-09 12:25 PM

"my memory was a popular tree autumn
tucking leaves in the g-string wind"

Ahhh Stranger... you just do it!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

9 posted 2006-04-09 03:08 AM

a pleasure to read

you do have an interesting way with words~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

bubblesleave
Member

since 2006-03-04

Posts 197
Bloomington, IN

10 posted 2006-04-09 03:15 AM

You've already been praised enough...haven't you?

well, maybe not,

no, no you haven't..

I like this one a lot!

Hugs,
Bubbles

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