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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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FLIGHT LIGHT(Re-worked) 1 September 2001 / 6 April 2006 Searching sky-eyed for your wings in soft colours waiting like a lake for you to call my name in leaf shapes listening for your almost-breath in breeze-songs of low ocean murmurs and I call on thunder thoughts to roll in rain-promised air and I am here in the midst of them ablaze and ready with sun-splashed lips to wrap you acquiescent in trembling birdsong. - Owl |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
verty nice..curiouse |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Diana....how lovely!!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoyed your flight of light in nature's surround sounds!  Very lovely! Love & Light and Bird Song, Linda  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"and I call on thunder thoughts to roll in rain-promised air and I am here in the midst of them ablaze and ready " Now that's some heat! Very nice write!! JL  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a moment you created! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, curiouse, Martie, Earth Angel, JL and passing shadows. This poem was written in response to the poem of a boyfriend of that time. I felt that mine was very mediocre in comparison to his, but managed to improve it a little bit recently. - Owl |
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