JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
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2006-04-06
11:41 AM
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A Spring Time’s Breeze
A warm spring’s wind rustles through the piney woods And it reminds me of a time with you. A time of banter about the future, comforting times…
A time when the days were there just for us A time for exploring our meanings to be together A time we took to look deep into each other’s soul…
A time now forgotten, lost in these piney woods A fragrance of the trees, carried on the wings Of this spring time’s breeze…
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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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2006-04-06
11:47 AM
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JL, I'm sending huggies right over to Texas...this was beautifully bittersweet, made me sad though, for you. Love to ya cowboy...wishing you a fine life, no matter where it leads you...a wonderfully rich poet as yourself, deserves all that life has to offer. Thank you for your continued support and friendship... Hugs your bud me
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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2006-04-06
11:48 AM
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I was suffused with so much emotion as I read your words. Beautifully and vividly expressed!
Lovely beyond words!
Warm, understanding hug, EA
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2006-04-06
12:06 PM
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so beautiful this is
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curiouse
Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england
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2006-04-06
12:10 PM
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i love it! curiouse
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
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2006-04-08
06:36 PM
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Pretty write JL... The pines never lose things, they collect what is good, and scent the world with it. Hugs, TD
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
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2006-04-08
09:15 PM
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You brought yesteryear into tomorrow... and that is not easily done.
Thank you for this, JL...it was just right for the evening spring breeze.
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garysgirl
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
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2006-04-18
01:30 AM
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I love this JL. I could almost hear the rustle of the wind blowing through the trees. Beautiful writing!! Hugs, Ethel
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miscellanea
Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
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2006-04-18
09:33 AM
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You have a way of transporting the reader-felt I was there! A calming reminiscence... Very much enjoyed. miscellanea
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