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Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA

0 posted 2006-04-06 11:41 AM

A Spring Time’s Breeze

A warm spring’s wind rustles through the piney woods
And it reminds me of a time with you.
A time of banter about the future, comforting times…

A time when the days were there just for us
A time for exploring our meanings to be together
A time we took to look deep into each other’s soul…

A time now forgotten, lost in these piney woods
A fragrance of the trees, carried on the wings
Of this spring time’s breeze…


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Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-04-06 11:47 AM

JL, I'm sending huggies right over to Texas...this was beautifully bittersweet, made me sad though, for you.  Love to ya cowboy...wishing you a fine life, no matter where it leads you...a wonderfully rich poet as yourself, deserves all that life has to offer.  Thank you for your continued support and friendship...
your bud

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2 posted 2006-04-06 11:48 AM

I was suffused with so much emotion as I read your words. Beautifully and vividly expressed!

Lovely beyond words!

Warm, understanding hug,

passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-04-06 12:06 PM

so beautiful this is
since 2006-03-21
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4 posted 2006-04-06 12:10 PM

i love it!

Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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5 posted 2006-04-08 06:36 PM

Pretty write JL...
The pines never lose things, they collect what is good, and scent the world with it.

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6 posted 2006-04-08 09:15 PM

You brought yesteryear into tomorrow...
and that is not easily done.

Thank you for this, was just right
for the evening spring breeze.

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since 2002-09-29
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7 posted 2006-04-18 01:30 AM

I love this JL.
I could almost hear
the rustle of the
wind blowing through the trees.
Beautiful writing!!

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8 posted 2006-04-18 09:33 AM

You have a way of transporting the reader-felt I was there!  A calming reminiscence...
Very much enjoyed.

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