passing shadows
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2006-04-09
07:51 PM
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repost for a friend who I know will always remember
Waterfalls
I would drop my life right now this very minute, all of it just to see your face, your eyes could always make me forget the consequences of being me damn, what a fool I've been and you are all I long for now one night of passionate sin
I weep for you to kiss me like you've loved me for years to breathe warm lies in my ear let my breast catch your tears
waterfalls I give to you tonight a desperate urge to give up the fight
and I would not mind losing the war if I had one night to lose it for
I would walk away from all of it let the chips fall where they may just to have you in my hands right now to draw you in my eyes of gray
then you would understand me how much it hurts, what I'd let go; to touch you from inside to see what you could show would give me back my faith in life... the water falls for you, you know.
August 24, 2003
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Dixie Lee Bullington
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Goldenrose
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2006-04-09
08:00 PM
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A most tender and hearfelt plea here in this poem Dixie....thank you very much..
Goldenrose http://wordsthoughtsfeelings.blogspot.com
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Androgynous
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2006-04-09
08:03 PM
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"and I would not mind losing the war if I had one night to lose it for"
Enjoyed the read, indeed
Love"How happy is the blameless vestal's lot! The world forgetting, by the world forgot. Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind!"
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StevenS
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2006-04-10
06:43 AM
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Dixie I know guys that would go over that waterfall in a teacup to give you that night. A lot of em! :-)
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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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2006-04-11
12:12 PM
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Beautifully sad...
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bubblesleave
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2006-04-11
12:26 PM
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Oh, my!
This is so wonderful.
Soooo so very, Wonderful!!!!!
I have a personal thing about Waterfalls.
Oh!
Thank YOU!!!
Again and AGAIN!
Bubbles
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bubblesleave
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Bloomington, IN
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2006-04-11
12:34 PM
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I had to read it again.
WOW!
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nakdthoughts
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2006-04-11
09:35 AM
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love the waterfall and your words~~ very nice Dixie
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HopeS
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Perth Western Australia
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2006-04-11
11:11 AM
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Dixie friend , I understand that longing
Hope
P.S by the way I have that graphic on my website
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suthern
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since 1999-07-29
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2006-04-17
02:55 PM
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and I would not mind losing the war if I had one night to lose it for
I know this... for what does it matter how long life stretches before us if there's no reason for living? *S*
Heart-touching write!!
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Honeybunch
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South Africa
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2006-04-17
04:44 PM
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This is absolutely lovely, Dixie - don't know how I missed it but glad to read it now. Oh, and the ending was absolutely perfect.
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Kathy
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2006-04-18
07:19 AM
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Oh, I like this one!
Kathy
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Earth Angel
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2006-04-18
08:58 AM
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For me, Darlin' Dixie, this is one of your most stirring love poems that I have read!
Loverly!
Linda
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sweetberry
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2006-05-24
04:05 AM
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Wow!!!
I love this one; thanx for capturing my thoughts and formulating them into such beautiful words.
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Rick
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2006-05-25
08:35 AM
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and I would not mind losing the war if I had one night to lose it for
I enjoyed your write Dixie, and these two lines were just great, grabbed me right away. Soldier on my friend and take care.
Sincerely Rick
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passing shadows
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2006-05-25
05:05 PM
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thanks everyone
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