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Waterfalls |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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repost for a friend who I know will always remember Waterfalls  I would drop my life right now this very minute, all of it just to see your face, your eyes could always make me forget the consequences of being me damn, what a fool I've been and you are all I long for now one night of passionate sin I weep for you to kiss me like you've loved me for years to breathe warm lies in my ear let my breast catch your tears waterfalls I give to you tonight a desperate urge to give up the fight and I would not mind losing the war if I had one night to lose it for I would walk away from all of it let the chips fall where they may just to have you in my hands right now to draw you in my eyes of gray then you would understand me how much it hurts, what I'd let go; to touch you from inside to see what you could show would give me back my faith in life... the water falls for you, you know. August 24, 2003 |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A most tender and hearfelt plea here in this poem Dixie....thank you very much.. Goldenrose |
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Androgynous Member
since 2006-04-08
Posts 71 |
"and I would not mind losing the war if I had one night to lose it for" Enjoyed the read, indeed  Love "How happy is the blameless vestal's lot! |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Dixie I know guys that would go over that waterfall in a teacup to give you that night. A lot of em! :-) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beautifully sad... |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
Oh, my! This is so wonderful. Soooo so very, Wonderful!!!!! I have a personal thing about Waterfalls. Oh! Thank YOU!!! Again and AGAIN! Bubbles |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
I had to read it again. WOW! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love the waterfall and your words~~ very nice Dixie  M |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Dixie friend , I understand that longing Hope P.S by the way I have that graphic on my website |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and I would not mind losing the war if I had one night to lose it for I know this... for what does it matter how long life stretches before us if there's no reason for living? *S* Heart-touching write!! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
This is absolutely lovely, Dixie - don't know how I missed it but glad to read it now. Oh, and the ending was absolutely perfect. |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
Oh, I like this one! Kathy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
For me, Darlin' Dixie, this is one of your most stirring love poems that I have read! Loverly! Linda |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Wow!!! I love this one; thanx for capturing my thoughts and formulating them into such beautiful words. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
and I would not mind losing the war if I had one night to lose it for I enjoyed your write Dixie, and these two lines were just great, grabbed me right away. Soldier on my friend and take care. Sincerely Rick |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks everyone  |
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