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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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gypsy shoes walking a hemingway gunslinger granola splashing the gravel on a candy apple afternoon's asphalt without a high noon's shadow they are just the clouds again and a thousand wet arrows but my freckles will survive the wounds are only water that I will feed the towel hounds when they whisper across my shoulders and surround my narrows like a lover wanting more just moments after their fantasy __________ daark scribblenote, puddlejump in wingtips...yep it is still rainin' |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
in-credable verbage...I was right there with you, holding your hand, pulling you over each and every puddle...then we found a shoe shine...my scarf...hmmmm, and I loved that scarf, but it was a good cause...it's raining here to D...but not nearly compared to what your getting. Heard on the news this morning, hurricane season..shiiisssh, thats a dirty word, is just around the corner, and they are of course, predicting another active one. God bless you all out there on the coast...even with the rain, there is still romance and great beauty within your state...especially Rt. 1.... Hugs and enjoyed you this early morning. |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...they are just the clouds again ~*~ You can even personalize heavy dew.  Good soggy morning to ya, Sir! PLEASE send the heavy clouds this way! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
What delight! Candy apple afternoons, even when the clouds are too heavy yet to bare the sun. Silver arrows and angel kisses compete like Cupid and Campaspe in your poem. No wonder you are puddlejumping in wingtips! Little grins. Hemingway would never stand for it! ~ Karen  http://www.bartleby.com/40/52.html |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you girls for your waves here D |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Candy for the imagination...hmmmmmm yummy  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"without a high noon's shadow they are just the clouds again and a thousand wet arrows" I can feel those little arrows. Great stuff Stranger. |
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