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desert stripes on lanes of sand
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desert stripes on lanes of sand |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
painting desert stripes on lanes of sand beneath the steam-squelched sun i came face to face with freedom’s chains in a race i’d slowed to run perceiving scorched the leaflets of my mind when first i thought my essence freed only to discover the bands of bondage were attached to emancipation’s seed with thought came not a liberty as once i had conceived but entangled me with responsibility... as words expose… my thoughts recede |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hmmm...in pondering this, and thinking how strings of love/attachment can never really be broken, I am wondering if you would even choose 'freedom' from such bondage? An interesting write. |
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EagletonDiva Member
since 2006-01-11
Posts 107 |
Life is never black and white as you have said here. There are always strings attached to every dream. Good write |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
think of this as the mind, with its convoluted patterns of thought...then take it from there (as it processes thoughts to words)...not nearly so noble as to be about life or love or lofty things...  |
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