Open Poetry #37 |
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Softly And Soulfully |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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Softly and Soulfully ![]() I still weep softly and soulfully. Perhaps I always will, who knows? There are certain times I let go and give in to the undertows. For the once of yesterday you were a hero and a friend, a special something I needed then, I'm glad God saw to send. But God gives and He takes away, for I leaned on you too long, diligently fighting simple reality, it's past its prime, now move on. I suppose greed is sin and when I got my overfill that is when this love of ours began to slide downhill... I weep softly and soulfully, still and perhaps, I always will. |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
What can I say? I have come to expect this of you...EXCELLENT JOB!!! I LOVE IT |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
You write emotion so well..thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Much enjoyed the emotional ride my friend, gives and takes away, that is the shame. At times we don't know what has been given till it is much too late, chances are seldom and choices are ours to make. It is unfortunate that sometimes we make the wrong choices about what would be right. Deep thoughts and cleansing words, thank you for sharing. Sincerely Rick |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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sweetberry, thank you so much! Phil, thank you for always reading! Rick, you are wise my friend. Thanks for sharing. |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dixie...Tender words from a tender heart. Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I still weep softly and soulfully. Perhaps I always will, who knows? " Very, very sad... But a lovely work of words. JL ![]() |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dixie - A sad but lovely write which I can most certainly relate to. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DixieDoodles~ 'But God gives and He takes away, for I leaned on you too long, diligently fighting simple reality, it's past its prime, now move on.' Recognizing it and acting on it go a long way to turning it all around~ You're a sweetie ... ya' know ? I do ! *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beautiful heart spill, Dixie........jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Paul, JL, Helen, Marge, Jo: you are each a blessing thank you |
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