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Open Poetry #37

Point Of Impact

Dr.Moose1
Member Elite

since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2006-04-04 04:08 PM

I would slow this descent
had I only the means
to defer that which comes
at the end of a fall.

Strive to find the right words
to convey what is seen
'fore this mood dissappears,
make some sense of it all.

But, the words are drowned out
by the rush of the wind,
as the eyesight grows blurred
and distorted by speed.

All attempts to relate
on one hope have been pinned
to the point of impact
for, the ink that I bleed's

a small pool, as it were,
quite like this "?", to be sure.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2006-04-07 03:23 PM

How on earth did this sink without response? This is excellent!!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2006-04-07 03:34 PM

Dr.Moose1
I agree with Suthern, well done.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-04-07 03:54 PM

thanks for bringing this back up! I woulda missed it!

excellent work!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2006-04-10 02:25 PM

"I would slow this descent
had I only the means
to defer that which comes
at the end of a fall"

Read that three times before the real intent of it sunk in...

outstanding work Doc!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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