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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Don't ask. There are no answers. Only temporary walls that confine us to our reality. Don't ask...let your eyes probe mine in silent yearning for a truth. Don't respond. Even as my fingers trail such questions to your lips. Don't... There are no answers. Only walls...falling soundless in our night. |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
wonderfull! absoloutly wonderfull, curiouse Curioustity is a fine gift... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
brilliant enjoyed this...took me in and held me there from beginning to end...it was haunting, yet, almost like a never ending story... we need a sequal to this...yes? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Don't ask...let your eyes probe mine in silent yearning for a truth. Don't respond. Even as my fingers trail such questions to your lips." Oh so beautiful Eric...much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful! Silence painted so sensitively with words. - Owl |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful write, Eric. Always such a pleasure to read you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric There is such a quiet passion within your words.  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Searching eyes...that seek into another universe between two people. A fantastic and uncertain adventure...captivating. Oh wow! |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
wonderfully romantic....  And so it those we live with |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Dreamy Ericc. |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Glad you are a member. I felt the "PASSION" in your poem!! I like it... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes....sometimes the eyes ask questions, that lips can't fully answer......and the spirit cares nothing for walls. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there are no answers Eric, this...another outstanding piece of work! |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Eric As usual you hit lower levels of understanding You could be in some camp in Somewhere else Dave Page |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Yet another beautiful write from you, Eric. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Eric, I read you poem with interest. It is very poetic, yet, it left me in silence. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Don't ask...let your eyes probe mine in silent yearning for a truth. I have missed reading you so much. *S* How very beautiful!!!! |
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