Open Poetry #37 |
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Whisper |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) ![]() |
Whisper I held you softly, sweetly, gratefully, to my pounding breast. You whispered tender kisses to my heart, and I could not protest. I know one such as you, could never true be mine. Still I longed for your touch, as a drunkard does his wine. But love is more than make believe, I know this must be true. Because I cannot hold her in my arms, when my heart is filled with you. So whisper to me one last kiss, as I whisper one for you. As we sacrifice the we for love, as often lover's do. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"But love is more than make believe, I know this must be true. Because I cannot hold her in my arms, when my heart is filled with you." Do you have any idea how beautiful this is? It makes my eyes misty and puts a lump in my throat. Such a lovely ache this piece is Steven. Gently placing this one into my library. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
But love is more than make believe, I know this must be true. Because I cannot hold her in my arms, when my heart is filled with you. stunningly beautiful |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Steven "But love is more than make believe, I know this must be true. Because I cannot hold her in my arms, when my heart is filled with you." Another song, me thinks! ![]() |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"So whisper to me one last kiss, as I whisper one for you. As we sacrifice the we for love, as often lover's do." Oh my, Steven. You've been reading my mail. It's wonderful. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Gorgeous. TD |
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pepperdaconvict New Member
since 2006-04-04
Posts 8 |
I like it alot. pepperdaconvict |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I know one such as you, could never true be mine. Still I longed for your touch, as a drunkard does his wine." Now this is a gem! I can relate to this verse. Great write StevenS. Enjoyed JL ![]() |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Thank you all so much! May the one you love whisper everything you long to hear!:-) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this has such a beautiful melancholic feel Steve I love it! |
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