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StevenS
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0 posted 2006-04-04 12:04 PM



Whisper


I held you softly, sweetly, gratefully,
to my pounding breast.
You whispered tender kisses to my heart,
and I could not protest.

I know one such as you,
could never true be mine.
Still I longed for your touch,
as a drunkard does his wine.

But love is more than make believe,
I know this must be true.
Because I cannot hold her in my arms,
when my heart is filled with you.

So whisper to me one last kiss,
as I whisper one for you.
As we sacrifice the we for love,
as often lover's do.

© Copyright 2006 Steven E. Stone - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-04-04 12:11 PM


"But love is more than make believe,
I know this must be true.
Because I cannot hold her in my arms,
when my heart is filled with you."

Do you have any idea how beautiful this is?
It makes my eyes misty and puts a lump in my throat.
Such a lovely ache this piece is Steven.
Gently placing this one into my library.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-04-04 01:02 PM


But love is more than make believe,
I know this must be true.
Because I cannot hold her in my arms,
when my heart is filled with you.


stunningly beautiful

Martie
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3 posted 2006-04-04 01:02 PM


Steven

"But love is more than make believe,
I know this must be true.
Because I cannot hold her in my arms,
when my heart is filled with you."

Another song, me thinks!  

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
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Oregon
4 posted 2006-04-04 04:12 PM


  awwwww!  Beautiful new song?

  ~ Klassy

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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5 posted 2006-04-04 04:37 PM




"So whisper to me one last kiss,
as I whisper one for you.
As we sacrifice the we for love,
as often lover's do."

Oh my, Steven. You've been reading my mail. It's wonderful.


ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
6 posted 2006-04-04 09:03 PM


Gorgeous.
TD

pepperdaconvict
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7 posted 2006-04-04 09:39 PM


I like it alot.


pepperdaconvict

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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8 posted 2006-04-05 12:11 PM


Nice...James
JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
9 posted 2006-04-05 11:17 AM


"I know one such as you,
could never true be mine.
Still I longed for your touch,
as a drunkard does his wine."


Now this is a gem!
I can relate to this verse.

Great write StevenS.
Enjoyed

JL

StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)
10 posted 2006-04-05 11:49 AM


Thank you all so much! May the one you love whisper everything you long to hear!:-)
passing shadows
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11 posted 2006-04-05 12:17 PM


this has such a beautiful melancholic feel Steve

I love it!

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