Open Poetry #37 |
It’s kind of sad because…. |
curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
It’s kind of sad because…. You are my inspiration, You are my one and only, You are heaven and you are hell You are my lover and you are my hater, You are the one I will spend the rest of my life with. You are the one that I can't wait to get away from. I am your inspiration, I am your one and only, I am your heaven and hell, I am your lover and you hater, I am the one you will spend the rest of you life with. I am the one you can't wait to get away from We are everything to each other, We are each others worlds, Each others lovers, Each others minds, We depend on one another, We give life to one another. We are each others inspiration, We are each others muse for life. We are each others life. We are I and you. Curioustity is a fine gift... |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
Hi (this is not the best of my poems) Curioustity is a fine gift... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I am your heaven and hell, I am your lover and you hater, I am the one you will spend the rest of you life with. I am the one you can't wait to get away from" Hummmmmm.... I think I know you. Do you have a picture? Sing opera. Heart and soul. The blues. Crying in your beer, but not: "I am the one you can't wait to get away from" You make light… No? JL |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
hey, thankyou for posting.no i love you for posting.lol. you liked my poem? good i like you, smiles, curiouse Curioustity is a fine gift... |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Your poem has a certain twist that I just love!!! We offen come to feel this way about our life partners. |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
One of your very best girl (me thinks). keep writing! Hugs, Bubbles |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
thankyou for your response bubblesleave and stawberry. smiles, curiouse Curioustity is a fine gift... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Now, to me, this dipicts real love...real relationships and reality...we are not always at our best, together.... yet, it is those difficult times that changes love...pushes love, so to speak, into a stronger emotion...going thru the tough times together, yanno? well done |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
well penned - many will relate ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
thankyou tracie 66 and leej i totally know what your saying and understand thanx again for posting, smiles, curiouse Curioustity is a fine gift... |
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