Open Poetry #37 |
Song -If I Had Known |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This "soft bluegrass" song will be released soon and has a simple but incredibly beautiful melody. IF I HAD KNOWN If I had known in youthful days The power of love, the way it stays I surely would have recognized The depth of love within your eyes If I had known a butterfly Could conquer space and wind and sky I would have seen her splendid ways And not the wings of colored glaze If only I had listened well To music from the valley swell I would have harbored deep within The meadow lark’s most sacred hymn I wish that I had walked the mile To seek the riches most worthwhile I would have known the loveliness Of hillside woods in autumn dress But I haven't any one regret. . . . Except that I cannot forget ...(If I had known) I don’t regret the life I chose But if I’d breathed the scent of rose The fragrance would have lingered here In my surroundings year to year If I had known that to survive The spirit ,too, must be alive I wouldn’t have lost a love so fine A treasure that was nearly mine If I had known I loved you so I never would have let you go But youthful eyes are in a daze And only see the colored glaze With dainty wing and willful might The butterfly takes distant flight How could my heart have seen those things Beyond the lovely painted wings? I haven’t any one regret..... Except that I cannot forget .....(If I had known) Elizabeth Santos |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz dear....oh how I wish there was a link to the whole thing, melody included. Your words are so beautiful, and brought a tear because you voiced a feeling I have also had. "How could my heart have seen those things Beyond the lovely painted wings? I haven’t any one regret..... Except that I cannot forget .....(If I had known)" Just beautiful!! And, my friend, I think you see far better and further than you give yourself credit for. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Liz ~~ As a huge fan of bluegrass, I have to say I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!! It is just awesome. Carter Stanley's daughter is a friend of mine and she would love this too. I can hear those mandolins and those mountain voices. Let me know where and when I can buy the CD! |
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