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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia 
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I often play little mind games, because it's such fun to pretend that there are things to be praised or blamed, with which to snuggle or contend. If one should read the poems I've penned... In browsing they might find... A multi-directional whirling wind; An ever changing mind. But, this is just the game I play. My efforts to "fit in" I really haven't much to say. And so... I just pretend. Here and there, among my many writes, there are hints at how I truly feel. It may seem my moods take various flights... But beneath it all... One thing stays real... 'Though I play at doubts and terrors... Beneath faux fears and frets and fuss... In truth... I see no errors ALL is glorious. So...I cannot always be pretending that things are out of whack, when I see only... Bliss... unending and know that Nothing lacks. There is... The way I SEE it is... and I really do not care about how others SAY it is And I've no way to share a poem about how... There is only BLISS and show you what I see... Remove the lines 'tween "that" and "this" Beyond the "you" and "me" Such a poem I cannot write Such a song I cannot sing If I do or if I might It would not change a thing. I could point a finger to a path that helps with your pursuing But it would be pretend and I'd have to laugh... Knowing nothing needed "doing". I could give you solutions... realistically I could even offer PROOF But I can only do it dualistically Which covers up the TRUTH. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Uriah, I know not about others but this to me is excellent. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool write |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Larry "So...I cannot always be pretending that things are out of whack, when I see only... Bliss... unending and know that Nothing lacks." An interesting confession. Enjoyed, as usual!  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Whoops! I didn't notice Martie chose the same lines I did until I already copied! I'm not at all into mind games, but I did like this a lot. With poetry as honest as this, it sounds like you have a lot to say. So...I cannot always be pretending that things are out of whack, when I see only... Bliss... unending and know that Nothing lacks. miscellanea |
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