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troubadour
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since 2006-02-09
Posts 43
in the land of yore

0 posted 2006-03-31 11:40 AM



I dream of coming Home, my love,
This word of a sweetest name;
Where the chill of the coldest night is warmed
By the glow of a roaring flame.

Be it the town, where a brick house stands
It greets a familiar sight;
There my journey comes to an end,
Within I find delight.

The wind sweeps over a field of gold,
Next a cottage fine;
Inside a treasure, beyond a measure,
Awaits on lips of wine.

In the forest deep, where a clear brook sings,
Its solace fills the mind;
A cabin nestled silent sleeps,
There your heart I find.

The town, the field, the deepest wood,
We may as the gypsy roam;
But wherever your dark eyes greet me, love -
I call Home, Sweet Home.

t

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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-03-31 12:51 PM


Wonderful melody T...enjoyed.
TD

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2006-03-31 12:53 PM


Simply delightful ... and this from one who longs for home!  Well done!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2006-03-31 02:34 PM


beautiful
Martie
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4 posted 2006-03-31 03:09 PM


This is beautiful!!
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-04-01 12:37 PM



"The town, the field, the deepest wood,
We may as the gypsy roam;
But wherever your dark eyes greet me, love -
I call Home, Sweet Home."

You haven't sung to us in a while t.
This was worth the wait.

miscellanea
Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
6 posted 2006-04-01 07:07 PM


I hear Dorothy in the background, "There's no place like home, there's no place like home..."  Lovely rendering.

miscellanea

StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)
7 posted 2006-04-01 07:34 PM


Excellent troubadour! :-)
troubadour
Junior Member
since 2006-02-09
Posts 43
in the land of yore
8 posted 2006-04-05 05:04 PM



Thank you so much, your words warm and inspire me.

t

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