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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-03-31 09:30 AM


To shoulder these burdens
that lay heavy upon your heart

I would, if I could

lighten your load
and remove the clouds
that shroud the sun from shining
upon your days

that you again felt the glow
of golden rays,
warming your spirit
deep inside

and that smile....

oh that smile,

would return
to your beautiful face
while chasing away
the dark, empty space
that has come to visit
and linger to long

I would, if I could

play you a celestial song
so that you could heal

and realize,
that you are strong

and that you are loved,
by all in overflow...

my sister of heart, my friend...

I just wanted  you to know...

{to cici, with love....}




seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-03-31 09:51 AM






JL
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Texas, USA
2 posted 2006-03-31 11:35 AM


I agree with Sunshine!!

Ditto!!

JL


passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-03-31 02:21 PM


beautiful and comforting
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

4 posted 2006-03-31 02:26 PM


a beautiful out pouring of love here Donna

Well Done

m xx

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2006-03-31 03:10 PM


Beautiful!
Love ya lady~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
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6 posted 2006-03-31 04:50 PM


What a lovely blessing of poetry.
Goldenrose
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7 posted 2006-03-31 05:24 PM


What a fine and noble heart you are Donna..thank you for the words..

Goldenrose.

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The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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8 posted 2006-04-01 12:19 PM




"I would, if I could

play you a celestial song
so that you could heal"


Exquisitely done Gentle Spirit.

  

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
9 posted 2006-04-01 08:55 AM


  Morning Donna!

I wanted to touch base with the gentleness of you..   thank you for the read.

Hope everything is well.





"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)
10 posted 2006-04-01 09:38 AM


I think you just played a very beautiful celestial song Gentle Spirit! Much Enjoyed! :-)
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
11 posted 2006-04-01 09:55 AM


Gentle One, this delicate penning from your heart has touched a strident chord in my own. Your friend is indeed fortunate to have someone as caring as you to reach out so lovingly to them.

Sending a warm hug of love to each of you.

Linda
Flowers

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