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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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ricky bolts and gobs of garages in their snuggy snack pack driveways with the un un's turned down so mommie nature don't wake her dawn and let it bulldog slobber the roses I put my jacket on upside down again but it goes with my flip flops and the girls at the 24 hour vons say my tattoos make them itch for something in the produce section I hate the highways of snobbervile they never have puddles after the rains no wonder the children there watch oprah to know what is important for the day since they never have had the risk of mud on their knee high white purity or the occasion to shiver from a chill that makes them love umbrella trees more than a bentley with a kardon on ___________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I hate the highways of snobbervile they never have puddles after the rains no wonder the children there watch oprah to know what is important for the day since they never have had the risk of mud on their knee high white purity or the occasion to shiver from a chill that makes them love umbrella trees more than a bentley with a kardon on Me too, my friend...me too... Hugs and good morning.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS If your title is reflective of Carmel by the Sea....There are places there that are a pleasure to me...like the sand and ocean....no different then those in Ventura. But, you're right about the rest...those children could happen in many a place, and it's pretty sad. I like the way you see things and how you explain in your colorful way.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms GS, thanks lady friend for the warm morning whisper _____________ ms martie, yes little neighbor, there is a different side of the castle town when you step behind the concrete pretty plastic..like it is an adult movie set sometimes placed on the innocent seaside.. I too love the sand and ocean there..it is the stepping off the sidewalk that hurts the souls of my eyes always a pleasure for you to read and wonder, thanks to you |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and the girls at the 24 hour vons say my tattoos make them itch for something in the produce section" Oh Stranger. Just oh. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady ms, oh, just oh thank you muchly |
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