Open Poetry #37 |
It's Here |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
It’s Here Its here I see a moments pause And offer up sincere applause To let my needle sew a stitch To stop the swiftness of the pitch This pause of picture makes you think It gives you entry by a wink It lets you place your feet a path It even lets you take a bath Off you go into the mist A magic carpets mental twist Sailing on a rainbows sea Sipping on the tea of free A phantom holds you by the hand A spirit guides you through the land It takes you through illusions eye You’ve left behind your humble pie Each picture threads the thread of hope It weaves for me an endless rope |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
For me..just enough rope to hang myself... interesting write Sigh....do you stay up nights thinking up this stuff? |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Loved this! Seems we've both been thinking of threads - mine have been on the unraveled ones. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And "hope" is the magic word here Sy! Looks like the start of a wonderfilled weekend. May yours be a relaxing one. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A magic carpets mental twist love this~~ M |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I can't choose between the rope of hope and the magic carpet... smile... I'll have them both!! Neeraja |
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