Open Poetry #37 |
Negative Resolution |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Negative Resolution It is a challenge writing negative, white against black with some second dare being, from one too close, “write of what is really not.” Hello again, Alice. Where’s the Windex? Too long hidden by hurt, pain, wonder; for even had one been the bad, good, and beautiful, what ripple wouldn’t have been noticed? Tsunamis come from a beginning ripple ~ had some stream been so untouched, where bathing in liquid pure turned water to ice, where then, would we be? When hate is dealt in viperous spew turning life once known, askew, then one’s seed so fertile grew in you, when tender’s touch was not ensued. And we, he, I, are now despised in someone’s [your] knowledge, eschewed. But…[Thank you God} The moral of this story knows/shows/ glows against the wrongs you set in all you sewed and growing strong in spite of some fear as white on black becomes quite clear. You may guise some noir film in your display then in rerun continuous, let it play ~ split your comments, and then weigh an “oh no really, didn’t mean my say.” Truth be known, I could have done the way of you, and been the run girl run… but you endorsed a gift, you see…for she has in her, some truth of what you might possibly never be. But she, she is some part of you, [though you’ll never in fact] see… fast laying truths in her own hard-won reality. You left her, to others, and to me. You left this bit o’ gold in hands that would free her of all sin, all binds that be… a resolution of some blast of negative adjust, some glory that will be! ~*~ This does not quite meet one challenge, but is a beginning, possibly, in negative writing. But, and I cannot do otherwise, than allow it to have other than a positive ending. |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
Now, I understand this one! Wonderful!!!!!!! "Hello again, Alice. Where’s the Windex?" Hugs, Bubbles |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
It is a challenge writing negative, white against black'''' yes it always is, but dear Karilea you rise above most..... And so it those we live with and should know who elude us But we can still love them we can love completely without complete understanding |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
sissie...It's much easier to do when you're not trying to do it. You did good!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Karilea, though I don't understand it all, I understand the love behind this and I'm saving it. *hugs*.....jo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thought provoking...the mood of March I perceive...striking really. I think you have inspired me. Hugs, TD |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent! Eric |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
A very strong write, Sunshine. |
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