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That Whole Eye Contact Thing
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That Whole Eye Contact Thing |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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You wouldn't stop looking, and me, with my issues, could only glance at you and quickly look away though all I wanted to do was wrap myself in your arms and have you kiss the top of my head and hold me but no, I couldn't, I had to avoid your eye contact |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
 Great writing Rhonda, I'm sure you'll get your man, he'd have to be pretty crazy not to fall in love with you. Andrew |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
been there, done it kinda stinks good write though |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
I might not like the style, or the flow of this piece, yet where I see those inequalities, I savour in the message and what that truly represents. Only my eyes for the moment are masked by a glass mirror, or the reality of a monitor before thee. Alas life can be so not what comes first - eye contact and a hint of love. a poet who cares |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I used to have a huge problem with eye contact....glad I'm not the only one..... ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Well I think eye contact is a great thing. As is this writing |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 When the eyes connect, so do the souls.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Greatly enjoyed! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Rhonda, what is so great is when you can see in someone's eyes, the same love you feel for them. My Gary says my eyes talk to him. And, his talk to me, too. We convey messages without speaking a word. But, that didn't happen overnight. This Christmas season (2006) we will be together for 9 years. Huggies, Ethel |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Rhonda, I'd love to have someone who made eye contact. I've been married for 37 years. My husband rarely looks me in the eye. I hope whoever you love, looks at you with greath depth and feeling and keeps you wrapped in his heart as well as his arms. Hugs Karen |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Rhonda, I feel a need to make eye contact with whomever I am speaking with. But, there have been a few in my days, I knew, that if I made I contact with I would absolutely melt.  Hugs...excellent write. ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
You're never alone...I used to have trouble with eye contact too! I still sometimes get shy around my boyfriend.  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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