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Open Poetry #37

I love you when....

curiouse
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since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

0 posted 2006-03-29 11:00 AM

I love you when...
I love it when you talk to me...
just hearing those tender words
put with so much care,
all my worries fly out of the door
and i can not help but smile
I love it when you look at me with those tender eyes.
talk to me with that soft tone
and when you touch me with that meaningfull grin
...oh...
Hey,
we talked last night and i can not be quick enough to talk to you again.
I love you... cause you want me so much
...oh you want me.
and that only makes me want you more.
when you come over and sit whith me,
I know that you'll look after me
and i love it when you put your arms
around me with such happiness.
but i'm in heaven when you look at my innocent eyes and my lovely lips for 2 minutes with that lovely grin and then you jump and you've got me..you've still got me and were not letting go.
so i guess we'll be together for ever....right...

(this needs to be improved...)

bubblesleave
Member

since 2006-03-04

Posts 197
Bloomington, IN

1 posted 2006-03-29 11:37 AM

good job of getting those feelings out and written down.

Keep writing!

Bubbles

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

2 posted 2006-03-29 11:56 AM

Much enjoyed!!

believe in what your heart feels...

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

3 posted 2006-03-29 03:01 PM

thankyou bubbles

curiouse
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since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

4 posted 2006-03-29 03:01 PM

thanx scorpio,
curouse

curiouse
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since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

5 posted 2006-03-29 03:01 PM

thanx guys,
curiouse

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