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I love you when....
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I love you when.... |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
I love you when... I love it when you talk to me... just hearing those tender words put with so much care, all my worries fly out of the door and i can not help but smile I love it when you look at me with those tender eyes. talk to me with that soft tone and when you touch me with that meaningfull grin ...oh... Hey, we talked last night and i can not be quick enough to talk to you again. I love you... cause you want me so much ...oh you want me. and that only makes me want you more. when you come over and sit whith me, I know that you'll look after me and i love it when you put your arms around me with such happiness. but i'm in heaven when you look at my innocent eyes and my lovely lips for 2 minutes with that lovely grin and then you jump and you've got me..you've still got me and were not letting go. so i guess we'll be together for ever....right... (this needs to be improved...) |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
good job of getting those feelings out and written down. Keep writing! Bubbles |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Much enjoyed!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
thankyou bubbles |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
thanx scorpio, curouse |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
thanx guys, curiouse |
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