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When Is Enough? . RP - for someone who needs to read it
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When Is Enough? . RP - for someone who needs to read it |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
When Is Enough? haunting, old words come around again inflict themselves, wound. was the harm, the fun of hurting not enough for you then? when is enough? when? |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
a good one (I think). I'm a bit dizzy from the read though. "Smiles" Bubbles |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Is it not wonderful when we can use our poetry to reach out and touch someone as you have so caringly just done?   EA |
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the grey Member
since 2006-01-06
Posts 119Queensland, Australia. |
It's sad old mate when folk get some kind of thrill out of hurting others, especially when it continues. Just when is enough? Reflective write. The Grey |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Yes ~~ it isn't my way to intrude, but there are times when a man simply must speak. I love this place and at least some of the people in it ~~ and there's enough hurt given accidentally, that to do it intentionally and for pleasure, simply shouldn't be done by anyone here. ~~J |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a good expressive poem...even if I don't know the reason~~~ M |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JaimeOhJaime~ Thank you ... there are those who are simply insensitive to the senitivity of others ... sadly, they read, see themselves and still choose to adhere to their regiment of stirring the pot ... knowing not (or maybe they do know and get some sort of sick satisfaction out of it) that the wounds run deep~ You are pretty gosh-darned dynamic at being a 'FIRST-friend-AID kit'~ *Huglets* to you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You know, I don't know who "needs to read this" but I imagine that person knows. Very expressive writing. Hugs, Ethel |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie...You have a good heart! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Great presentation!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jamie darling man, I get in here so rarely these days that I don't know anything about what has gone before, but whatever the story behind it this is a superb piece. The presentation is outstanding and I really felt the power of the word. Well done my sweet friend, take care as always Mushy x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Whoever walked over your feelings with no regard or someone elses feelings. This has, in a kindly fashion, put them in their place. HUgs coming your way from Ohio BonBon  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ooops! Disregard my previous reply, PLEASE! I just reread your poem and this is now my reply! ~ "For whomever this was intended, I sure hope that they read it!" I think that your posting of the poem was a caring gesture for the one for whom you are feeling compassion. EA |
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