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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2006-03-28 11:28 PM


Within


Upon the edge of thoughts
Loneliness stabbing thru love hearts
Until wings of an angel
Smooth the hurt
All within
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bernie





A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (03-29-2006 12:00 AM).]

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2 posted 2006-03-29 12:41 PM


Very nice Bernie!


Bubbles

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4 posted 2006-03-30 12:07 PM


This was very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
iliana
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5 posted 2006-03-30 12:14 PM


Ah, Bernie......I think Earth Angel expressed it best (and from an Angel, too)..... ....jo
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6 posted 2006-03-30 12:56 PM


Good one Bernie.

JL


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7 posted 2006-03-30 01:11 AM


Sweet healing wings!  

~ Karen

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8 posted 2006-03-30 06:40 AM


Just felt like reading this one again~~



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