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In the face of danger
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In the face of danger |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813
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In the frequency of the ringing and the tenacity of time continuance in the plaintive click when instead of you, I pick up the receiver I can sense a danger there In the anger that quickly swelters against the face of my opposition and the low growl of your justify I can clearly hear a danger there In the need to carefully cover tracks so that neither of us will realize that while still wearing the scars from the previous passing we are started down the same path of twice before the mouth of this yawns wide open and waiting and I do greatly fear the danger there I am sorry that I shouted out with such intensity it must have seemed more an infraction than an act of love please accept my apology I wish it were within me to quietly say please come away from there I can sense a danger |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Once trust is lost... it's so very hard to find it... and its lack comes back to bite us time and again. Excellent, painful write!!! |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
well it seems this morning, the slats in the bridge have been repaired...and sigh...no...its not easy...for I have kicked out quite a few of the slats myself... thank you lady |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And those rope bridges are difficult enough when every slat is in place. *S* Hang tough, my friend... and hold tight. *S* |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Slats need to be replaced once in the while..  Well done."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
hang tough? hold tight? *very hopeful look* you mean there are other choices? I mean... I haven't looked down...you know...that gravity thing...but can you see my back from there...have I sprouted wings? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Those aren't choices... they're necessities! LOL For nope... no wings... just a figure that would make me hate you if I didn't love you. LOL But... no wings... which means that gravity thing isn't a friend to falling luminous ones. *G* |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
lol...ok...dutifully hanging tight...but...you let me know bout those wings ok? susan, thank you...and yes, sometimes slats are a good thing |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
well, you still got your halo...  |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
I do? *pats head* *pats head again* where is it, it was here just the other day *pats head again* *g* |
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