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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-03-28 08:05 AM


I sit in the room of stones
and watch the old trees bend
there is no wind there
but they hear the songs
from yesterday
and lean their limbs to worship

there are oceans in their eyes
between the leaves again
they watch the windows of sky
waiting for the son of suns
to heal them into acorns
and forgive the sins of their roots

their bark is redwood fragile
it peels to the touch
of their forested abrasions
but yet they sway together
undressing themselves
for the salvation or morning

and she is there at the counter
calling names that never answer
looking at faces that never smile
she makes her mark by their names
counting them as her children
counting them as the green yesterdays

sawdust blood, no one knew their news

_____________

daark

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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-03-28 08:28 AM



Whenever I am in need of
some amaze,
and awe,

I read you.


Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2006-03-28 08:50 AM


It has been to long my friend
since my eyes have fallen upon
your words..

I needed this today..
yes I did...

Very much enjoyed mi'amigo...

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
3 posted 2006-03-28 10:25 AM


"their bark is redwood fragile
it peels to the touch
of their forested abrasions
but yet they sway together
undressing themselves
for the salvation or morning"


What I copied is my favorite for several reasons, but it was the last verse that reminded me of someone that has long since removed themselves from my life...

  Sometimes it's good to remember and miss..thanks.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
4 posted 2006-03-28 11:38 AM


DS

"to heal them into acorns
and forgive the sins of their roots"

I love that part, and all of it.  Very thoughtfilled!  


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