Open Poetry #37 |
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I am but a seed |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) ![]() |
I am but a seed, this body but a shell. Sown into a world, for a while I must dwell. Pushing forth year after year, through sands of joy, of pain, of times. Nourished with love and watered with tears, from this seed my spirit climbs. Hail and howling wind, have both sought to uproot me. Shadows have fell dark o'er my head, a light I could not see. Still I clung with all my might, by one tiny root it seems. The root of love, that fills my head and heart with dreams. When this seed has finally flourished, when it's spirit fruit ripens and bows it's head. May the love that has been it's source of life, be it's final reward, when at last this earthly husk is shed. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
by one tiny root it seems. The root of love, that fills my head and heart with dreams." How true this is for me. Good writing. Hugs, Ethel |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May the love that has been it's source of life, be it's final reward, when at last this earthly husk is shed. ~*~ A song filled prayer... thank you, Steven. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Steven "When this seed has finally flourished, when it's spirit fruit ripens and bows it's head. May the love that has been it's source of life, be it's final reward, when at last this earthly husk is shed." May it be so!! ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"When this seed has finally flourished, when it's spirit fruit ripens and bows it's head. May the love that has been it's source of life, be it's final reward, when at last this earthly husk is shed." Reads like a prayer Steven... And may it be so. ~Smiles, & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Steven, I'm so glad the Spirit climbs, expands, outgrows this mortal seed. We would be so much less without its beauty. It so blesses us, The joy behind a smile or laughter, a hug, a success, gratitude, being able to share, and just simply love...all nothing with no spirit to record it. The one thing we take with us! Your spirit shines! ~ Karen [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (03-28-2006 10:16 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful write! very uplifting! |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is very uplifting, and well crafted! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Steven This was a truly outstanding piece of writing which was thoroughly enjoyed by this reader. Thank you for sharing your words of wisdom. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
i loved the descripton and how it connects with the over all message, nice pice. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Thank You, Thank you very much, I love doing Elvis! :-) Saying that four letter word sometimes sends people running for cover don't it? Love I think is the most misconstrued word in the english language. Oh the images that flood my mind when it is said. To believe God is Love requires me to look at it from a different viewpoint. I have to believe it is broader, deeper, brighter, and stronger than I had once thought. So I find myself on a quest to understand or at least to learn what that four letter word really means. I thank many here for helping me to find that path. Now I will be looking to you to help me walk it. :-) Peace |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"When this seed has finally flourished, when it's spirit fruit ripens and bows it's head. May the love that has been it's source of life, be it's final reward, when at last this earthly husk is shed." A wish for us all, Steven.....lovely. ...jo |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
The Good Book says, "And there remains, Faith, Hope and Love, and the greatest of these is Love." Enjoyed the peace in your poem in the midst of storm. - Owl |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Yes iliana, a wish for us all! :-) Agreeing with the good book Owl! :-) |
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terasinas Member
since 2006-03-24
Posts 91Michigan ... The Great Lakes |
Nice Steven tera |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This one is a keeper, no doubt. Excellent write StevenS. JL ![]() |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Ahhhh Steven, now that's a lovely poem. Thank you. |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: You may be a seed... But you bud,Bud! You blooming bloom! |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
wonderfully said and a reminder we are all seeds.... ![]() And so it those we live with |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Thank you Tera, and belated welcome! :-) Thank you JL, thats what the doctor said when our premature son was born, "He's a keeper! :-) Lovey, that word means alot when spoken by a lovely Lady. :-) You got me Uriah, granpa said I was the flower of the family,...a blooming #3%7&!:-) Thank you Greeneyes, yes we are seeds, seeds with the power to choose what manner of fruit we will become. Amazing! :-) |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Nice write...I enjoyed it very much! |
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