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Open Poetry #37

City night

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2006-03-26 03:02 PM

Last night when I looked
out the rail car window
I started to wonder
if what I saw there was
real or an reflection

They say in the city
when it is dark out side
the street lights go on
and the dark seems darker

Then comes latter day thugs
Ones without business suites
The only color comes
from lips of broken girls

I always pondered why
they travel the streets
writing their name on the walls
dieing because of art

like I was here.......

My stop came and so I left
My friend was going back with
some guy she once kind of dated
and I back to my dorm room

I looked at my own life
and then I understood
how human we all are

-Juju

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* Juju *
-<>-~-<>-~-<>-

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2006-03-26 04:18 PM

Such is the reality of life in all it's forms, the thugs should not make you afraid..more pitty them..you have an opportunity to step away from anything resembling thuggishness, with hard work at your college..enjoyed the observations...thank you..

Goldenrose

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-03-28 09:12 PM

how human we are, yes

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

3 posted 2006-03-28 09:31 PM

I really, really liked this.
Really.

Great write.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2006-03-28 11:47 PM

Enjoyed...James

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2006-04-07 07:22 PM

Thank you so much for rour responces

-Juju

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