Open Poetry #37 |
Only a word |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Only a word If I was a butterfly How would you ever find me? I hide among the flowers The things I will never be And if you were to catch me How would you ever hold me? Would your fear of harming me Stop you from touching my wings? Would I be displayed and framed To be some kind of trophy Or worse pinned up with many To dry up and fade away Love can always be forever Memories will be forgotten And then time will continue on But there will some day be a time When you can no longer chase me Destiny is only a word... Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
i really enjoyed this. i can feel pain and frustration through the use of words.keep going. and just remember to have juju might be good. BUT to feel the juju is a BAD thing |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you for your reply -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"If I was a butterfly How would you ever find me? I hide among the flowers The things I will never be And if you were to catch me How would you ever hold me? Would your fear of harming me Stop you from touching my wings?" I love those lines, in particular... Very much enjoyed the read... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good job, Juju, and good analogy. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
that was wonderfaull.. |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Butterfly don't fly away.......paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enjoyed your words... can relate M |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Wow This is one of my older ones. I like that some one went back to look at them. makes me smile _Juju |
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