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Open Poetry #37

I bite

For_Never
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America

0 posted 2006-03-25 08:42 PM

Longing is what..
what I do best
searching for truth
settling for lies
for velvet soft shadows
soothe far more wounds
then the cleasing sting
of truth can heal.

Longing is what..
what I do best
living for the softest touch
of the caring hand of another
upon my soul, striking in accord
with the ancient song
that defines my life
but not of my choice.

longing is what..
what I do

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2006-03-26 02:32 AM

Don't think I've welcomed you to Passions...welcome! This is an interesting poem; thanks for sharing.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2006-03-27 06:14 PM

Enjoyed...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2006-03-27 07:27 PM

Welcome home!

Kitttheory
New Member

since 2005-11-11

Posts 4
Washington,US

4 posted 2006-03-28 01:25 AM

Longing...I'm right there with you...

Kathy
Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 153

5 posted 2006-03-28 01:31 AM

I really like this one...

Somehow, it draws me in....and...holds me..

that is a good thing...that is a writer's job ...

Great job!!!

Thanks,
Kathy

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