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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2006-03-24 05:08 AM


there are fingers without spoons
spanking funk upon my thigh
there's someone I don't even know
pressed too close to mah behind
and I don't give a damn.

talk a different smooth to me
yank my hair and kiss me sweet
there, upon my neck where I
meet the dark gods of despise
and they don't give a damn

and I

laugh at their demise.

*lights*
I love the way they change
*flash*
I am the re-arranged
molecules of used-to-be
sweat is sweet
and I am me
and you are who
I'd like to meet

dancing dozens in the fleet
feet of synchronicity

delerious and wild are we

strawberries again...

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2006-03-24 06:14 AM


I am the re-arranged
molecules of used-to-be


love it, Karen~~~


M

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2006-03-24 06:42 AM


Really enjoyed this write - brought a smile on a grey, grey, day.

"I am the re-arranged
molecules of used-to-be" - so very well said.  Am off to the mirror to see if I belong to that clan.  

Helen



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3 posted 2006-03-24 08:04 AM


I'd like to meet

dancing dozens in the fleet
feet of synchronicity

delerious and wild are we

~*~

now that just tingled my tongue
and tripped delightedly...




Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-03-24 08:20 AM


I love the slow amble
of watermelons
seedless easy
but still too slow
to hurry a brain freeze

enjoyed your art ms

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2006-03-24 09:12 AM


I love strawberries in my mouth, in my tummy ~ and on my neck! Pigtails

Sweet, succulent, sumptuous strawberries! Mmm! Mmm! Strawberry

Happy springtime!
Linda



LeeJ
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6 posted 2006-03-24 09:20 AM


talk a different smooth to me
yank my hair and kiss me sweet
there, upon my neck where I
meet the dark gods of despise
and they don't give a damn

I love people who are not afraid to be who they are...lady, your a wonder...

Happy Friday

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7 posted 2006-03-24 01:29 PM


I am catching up honest!  Loved this one lady.
Paul Wilson
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8 posted 2006-03-24 02:50 PM


Karen...Damn you are electrifying sometimes.
I got some cool whip LOL. Enjoyed...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

iliana
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9 posted 2006-03-24 03:03 PM


"*lights*
I love the way they change
*flash*
I am the re-arranged
molecules of used-to-be
sweat is sweet
and I am me
and you are who
I'd like to meet"

I want some of those strawberries !  Tho' at times, I have to admit, I enjoy a well-grown raspberry , too....lol -- *hugs*....jo


XOx Uriah xOX
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10 posted 2006-03-24 03:45 PM


The sap is rising.  Juices flowing. Absorbing the heat.  Plump.  ripe.  The sweat is sweet.
It's all gravy, baby.

Local Rebel
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11 posted 2006-03-24 09:45 PM


sounds like a wild patch...

reckon where a fella could grab a bucket and round up a mess to take home?

[This message has been edited by Local Rebel (03-24-2006 10:26 PM).]

serenity blaze
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12 posted 2006-03-24 10:14 PM


and yep Reb, that's for you...

inspired by the sight of strawberries in a blender--it reminded me of Benny's Blues Saloon for some reason.

And neither of 'em ain't there no more.

Thanks for reading strawberries, entry II.

You folks are so kindly generous.

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13 posted 2006-03-27 11:24 PM


Strawberries....who'd have thought?

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serenity blaze
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14 posted 2006-03-28 12:16 PM


sometimes a cigar is just a cigar...

and sometimes?

a cigar can get ya impeached.

Thanks for letting me know you stopped in, Ed.

Next time tho? Let me know if y'liked it.


Kathy
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15 posted 2006-03-28 01:27 AM


You do so love those Stawberries, don't you!

Makes me want some too....Yummy

I might see if I can find some tomorrow.

Kathy

serenity blaze
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16 posted 2006-03-28 01:30 AM


can't seem to help m'self

they are in season here

eight bucks a flat

and I was just reading yours, btw...

thanks for taking the time Kathy.

Kathy
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17 posted 2006-03-28 01:35 AM


You do wonderful work...here...I enjoy your writing....talented one!

Keep it up girl.

Hugs,

kathy

Susan Caldwell
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18 posted 2006-03-28 09:58 AM


Somedays, I just need ta read ya.

and today Strawberries give me the warmth I was looking for.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Dark Angel
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19 posted 2006-03-28 02:37 PM


awesome as always m'lady

m xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

OwlSA
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20 posted 2006-03-28 02:38 PM


And you are you - and thank goodness for that!  We'd be much poorer if you weren't.

Loved your wild strawberries and wild you!

- Owl

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21 posted 2006-03-28 03:14 PM


Hey Karen, Lady,
I just had to look in and see if the
strawberry was really the strawberry. LOLOL

You are one talented lady, Sweet Serenity!!
I really did enjoy this one, Karen!!
Huggies,
Ethel

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22 posted 2006-03-28 08:48 PM


so very inspiring!
kayjay
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23 posted 2006-03-28 08:58 PM


I'm with nakedthoughts.

"I am the re-arranged
molecules of used-to-be"

What wonderful phrasing!  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

The Lady
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24 posted 2006-03-28 11:31 PM



Oh yeah! That one really does it.

How you do go on. Need I say sensuous?


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