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Evermore To Wander
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Evermore To Wander |
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LifeSinger Junior Member
since 2006-01-15
Posts 25Kentucky, USA |
Im new, and probably one of the youngest people on here, so here goes. EVERMORE TO WANDER I watch the figure fade slowly the loss of a freind and enemy lying in the plush softness of guilt listening to the clock tick seconds, minutes, life away into the black hole that is time strolling down the streets of foriegn images white walls stained with splotches of pain and sorrow and my thoghts revolve around you around your arrival around my final revenge strangely satysfying walking in the alley of my unknown subconsious evermore to wander. |
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littleJas Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 39Australia |
What a great first post, welcome I hope you enjoy posting here as I do  Jas |
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LifeSinger Junior Member
since 2006-01-15
Posts 25Kentucky, USA |
Thanks, I'm sure I will. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Hello and welcome to pip, wonderful first post very nicely written. Looking forward to reading some more, hope you enjoy it here Julie |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
A GOOD FIRST POST,WELCOME TO PIP...PAUL shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions ! Enjoy yourself here. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
welcome to Passions I enjoyed the way you entered. Wandering around in here can be great fun, not to mention educational. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
first, welcome...second, this poem is exceptionally good...keep up the excellent writing (regardless of your age)... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very nice entrance you have made here. I look forward to reading more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Great work. Thanks for sharing. |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China |
Great poem, keep up the great work. Never let your pen get away from you. Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
BRAVO! Great first post, can't wait to see more from you. You'll enjoy the great circle of friends which is passions. ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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openthoughts Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 94Where the child can be free |
1) Age means nothing to the open mind when it comes to poetry 2) Welcome to passions...I'm new as well. my first poem was posted merely an hour or two ago but i don't believe it got quite the warm welcome that yours did 3) Your poetry is beautiful and stricken with grief. It actually bears a stricking resemblance to my writing style which was what jumped out in my mind when i first read it 4) You may be among the youngest but I doubt you ARE the youngest. I may rival you there. My age may be concealed in my next poem |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You might be young, but you write with a seasoned touch! Great first poem! Welcome to Passions, LifeSinger. ...jo |
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LifeSinger Junior Member
since 2006-01-15
Posts 25Kentucky, USA |
Thanks, you guys,i appreciate the warm welcome ^^ |
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