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a woman's insecurity
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a woman's insecurity |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Unknown summer nudges rapture sizzling aloof wind knocking at my door I feel the heat of your breath forbidding me to look away whimpering under your cynical pass you thought you knew with monarch watch, of black & orange whispering, “you can never leave” “you will never leave!” fierce eyes brushing against my cheek slowly descending upon hesitation beyond maddness beyond turning back fear replacing blood in my veins crawling sensations of sadness “coward!” I scream again and again you live in that mind that’s hungry alive but alone, alone hugging me back while at my most vulnerable you leaned in way to close dragging my heart to ruination like a pirate you came to steal with bouts of leaving tattered sails 3 years afloat those wind chilled angry seas… shaving little memories that touched my Earth’s core hearing frenzied fervor rocking back and forth back and forth in that swallowed place of long ago His face of white, afire…golden moments inspecting me unlocking cages of existence I loved the groans that came in shattered breath the fear that shook my heart, my head looking around trying to guess the stranger’s suspicion…he was the director hiding a grind, suffering my entire being The owl with grey hooded wings swooping me in the frosted might of darkness two souls prompting wonder engraved with a lover’s kiss filled with deep distant moans of knowing crystal silence The place everyone goes once in their life placing it’s arm around my waist again telling me the truth about feelings about what mentions my name then slowly moves away chit chat things in the night and i wonder how they break you so when tomorrow looks in your eyes pathetic marvelous questioning love throwing a fit of temper hush now...sheesshhh I shall doubt you again and again because I can’t see any other explanation standing in line and your mood is the only color I know chew on my faults so that there is a reason for the female insecurity I love I turned around to look once more inbetween the growing distance that I left |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mmmmmmmmmmm ms Lee J, your fireside is a verve of animation..much enjoyed you here |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
LeeJ, this is a masterpiece I shall save to read again and again. I'm unable to even pick out a favorite part, the entire write touches and haunts me so. Wow! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
many thanks to you both for stopping by and taking the time to read. Wanted to post this in forum #37, but the system wouldn't allow me to, actually said there was an unsavory word within the text, which I won't repeat, but there wasn't? |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
strange...yes, it should be in 37. you've probably checked with a moderator by now. It would be a shame for anyone to miss it. K |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"The owl with grey hooded wings swooping me in the frosted might of darkness two souls prompting wonder engraved with a lover’s kiss filled with deep distant moans of knowing crystal silence" ~ Oooo! Your wonderfully descriptive words gave me goosebumps! Gosh yer good!  May your spring be a joyful one! Loveya! Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You tell it like it is. Enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ "pathetic marvelous questioning love" That says it all!!  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"pathetic marvelous questioning love" Filled with passionate emotion, and too of the reality of having to share with another to make that insecurity possible, yet without reciprocation in even the simplest of consideration. LUV 2 U JL  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
AWESOME!! TD |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
touching and inspriring god this peom relates to me so much thankyou |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Loved this |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Another exceptional write, LeeJ, that goes deeper than deep. I think it's left me feeling rather numb - raw emotion can do that, you know. Before I go let me just say, "Wow!" |
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the grey Member
since 2006-01-06
Posts 119Queensland, Australia. |
G'day LeeJ. I've just been reading a few of your verses and you certainly have a poetic way with words and an interesting mind.  The Grey |
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