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It's the little Things
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It's the little Things |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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It’s the little Things It’s the little things that make the notes That warms my heart and burns my throat It’s the little things that make the song That makes me feel that I belong The trill the tweak that makes me weak The smallest echo of what I seek A whisper in the wind that’s there The faintest movement that you care My mind is full of small reply Of little things of small imply Of gestures only I can see As subtle as the taste of tea It touches me a spirits light Graceful as a bird in flight Naivety that shows its view As gentle as the mornings dew It is the nectar I detect It is the nectar I collect |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
simple yet most elegant things yes, this mornings rush comes from a warm and lovely climate...yours well done sir |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy this is sweet nectar. Thanks for letting us collect it. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, you start my morning with the sweetest songs! This is oh so loverly! ~Morning Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Yes dear Sy...it is the little things! Beautiful write...thank you for a smile so bright and early! "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The nectar that flows from your pen is my morning dew!  A very fine piece of writing, Sir Sonneteer! Angel hugs 'n kisses, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you sweety, hugs and  Sscorpio You welcome and thank you. Nancy Thank you dear and hugs back. Aimster Thank you for the read and reply. Earth Angel Kisses and hug from my favorite Angel. Thank you thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You're welcome! You're welcome!  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sy, Tori (my oldest granddaughter had a sleepover last night as she has an outing for school today,) and she and I read this together, and she says to tell you that it should be in a book for kids to read with some pictures, as it is sure "radical!"  Know what? I agree with her, those first two stanzas especially are not only heart-warming, but a different version of the "Golden Rule." I, or rather we, just loved it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You are a love.  Sharon and Tori, That was the nicest and warnest reply I ever got. Thank you both. Hugs and s |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Sy this is breathtaking - another fine write  ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
Ahh, so you do agree with MR. Eienstien then... God is in the details!...? Great write Hugs, Kathy |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
The sweet things in life, the nectar.... not always obvious to others, but when one is looking through their heart, little things and small replies become very vivid, no? Now I hear your heart talkingl too!  Wonderful! LOL~ Karen |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Enjoyed this Sy, 'tis indeed the little things that count. The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
smiling here* what a heartfelt piece Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all unanswered above, My heart felt thanks for your read and delightful replies. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
The little things, sometimes are the best. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick I think so, thank you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It seems the little things bring us both the greatest joy... and the greatest pain when they're gone. *S* This is excellent, dear friend... I greatly enjoyed! *S* |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
sweet My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Thank you dear. |
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